Entry: Bits and Pieces Wednesday, May 10, 2006



Leave me and let me be.

 
Let thy touch no longer fuel my passion, let thy words no longer haunt my ears. Let thy actions no longer cause my heartache, and let time heal these wounds within. No longer can I allow thy kisses, for with each kiss I feel the poison seep into me.

 
And how sweet thy poison is.

 
Thy poison is bittersweet, for with it brings sadness and intense grief, for thy poison binds me to you with each kiss. For with each kiss, our souls connect and I feel what you feel, and that intertwining of souls makes each one vulnerable to the aches and pains of the other. And I feel my soul wax and wane with thy soul’s waxing and waning, and I am no longer in control of my emotions.

 
I am free of control, and I relish it.

 
There is a wall within thee, and it contains a darkness I cannot fathom. And sometimes the darkness seeps through those cracks in the wall and it consumes thee. And during these times, it is as if a stranger has replaced thee, and I almost fear that strange man, for he cares not for my heart, or seems unable to.

 
Come back to me, and replace these broken pieces.

 
Let me remind thyself that love often comes with sorrow, and bits and pieces carefully strewn within the nooks and crannies of our passion, and above all, the words written come from the unpredictable fluctuations of a soul drained of emotion. And emotionless souls are not worth the paper they write on.

   11 comments

reza
June 17, 2006   06:42 PM PDT
 
so i shall present thee a bouquet of scarlet roses and bid farewell for i shalt not return!..

thou shalt not grief in sorrow but to look upon a new morrow with what is left of thyself..

i think shakespere was gay.. eh?

cool posts! linking it now
Miss Aida
May 17, 2006   09:10 PM PDT
 
I just thought I'd clarify that this piece is fiction. My relationship is going strong, and we've yet to have a fight.

But thank you for the concern. :)
Dev
May 16, 2006   09:57 AM PDT
 
Very pasionate. So much of feeling. My hati feel for your poetic ammunition.
pinknerd
May 15, 2006   09:44 PM PDT
 
Hello :) It's a beautiful, beautiful entry. My compliments can't even sum its worth. Just beautiful.
Shahriman Latif
May 15, 2006   09:19 AM PDT
 
How angry and tender can a woman's words be. Wonderful, beautiful prose!
LaiLy
May 13, 2006   10:51 PM PDT
 
i can't say i understand what lies between the lines, but I do pray u're holding on good...

yes, love is bittersweet. love we can't live without. love keeps u strong. face it bravely, hun. im sure u're gonna pull thru. :)
hidzad
May 13, 2006   02:47 AM PDT
 
i agree with what everyone said =) bittersweet.
Iyra
May 12, 2006   06:27 PM PDT
 
Babes, hope u're alright. Just keep in mind that every relationship goes through a rough patch every now and then. Am confident you and the lucky bugger will get thru this soon. But if you need anyone to talk to i'm always here k.
diana
May 11, 2006   04:36 PM PDT
 
this is beautiful. I'm sorry to say that I am feeling the same way about my man right now. Worried. Scared. Alone. :(
dD
May 10, 2006   08:15 PM PDT
 
stunning & refreshing.
anas
May 10, 2006   05:20 AM PDT
 
aida i find it very hard for me to understand.. damnn my english sucks..tension betul..huh

btw i hope u r ok coz the post sounded tak best.. take care aite n everything will be alrite.. :)

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